Quiet Poetry Lounge : I don’t need

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 25, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i posted....
    the rough draft
    :angel1:

    I don’t need a diamond ring
    Or a big house…
    I don’t need all the finer things in life….
    I got the best there is….
    As long as I got you
    and the love you give.....
    I am the happiest woman
    In the world…..
    For there is no other love
    as you give to me….
    unconditionally
    I don’t need lots of money
    Nor do I need that fancy car….
    Your smile in da morning
    And the warmth thru the night….
    As this light shine upon us…….
    See……….
    I don’t want forever young…..
    Nor the everyday gifts
    When I have the best thing of all
    Your love
    Your love…………the strength of you
    Inside of me…..
    See everything is not everything
    I don’t want it all on the plate….
    Just your love…..be just fine…..with me….
    My love
    My Sweet love….
    The connection of a feelin so good
    So smooth……the love of you
    Is the essences of me……
    Your love my love
    Is our love…a sweet melody
    The understanding
    comforting and loving....is all i need
    holdin my hand….
    Takin me further……up up
    High…the desire of those who search
    And try to reach…but I got it all
    In you….i don’t need nothing on a silver platter…
    As long as I got
    Your love…..your love….your love….
    Is my love…..out of a sweet far off dream….
    You came upon me….and loved me for me…
    Thank you for your love
    Thank you for caring
    Thank you for always be there and
    lovin me as you do…My love
    Sweet love………
    ________blkangel thang
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done all u need is right before u
    this was sweet and gentle
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't see anything rough about this...your scribe is clear...may you have what money can't buy.
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe sister...
    Peace
    Blue
     
  5. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin ya

    that was clear as crystal for me

    scribble on
     
  6. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    What does my financial situation have to do with this?

    :D
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected]....pretty funny.
     
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