Black Poetry : I Don´t Need You

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  1. Anquita

    Anquita New Member MEMBER

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    he said:
    did you ectually think i would stay whit you
    did you think i loved you i have better things to do

    she said:
    i didn´t think you would stay whit me
    but i hoped
    i hoped you would love me like i loved you
    i hoped there was a chance for you and me
    but i was wrong
    i am a woman
    and i need to take care of myself
    i don´t need you
    i need to someone who knowes how to tread me
    that ain´t you
    i need someone who loves me like i love him
    your not that someone
    so leave
    and let me live my life
    my life
    a life that doesn´t need someone like you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

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    :wave: welcome to destee.com...
    nice write...i feel ya vibin :angel1:
     
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    Hey:wave: Welcome to the family
    of love amd embrace
    this was a nice peice
    looking forward to
    reading more
    Peace
     
  5. PositiveMindset

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    Nice intro.

    You've got 2 love yourself, before U can love others, and U seem 2 be on the right track.

    Treat yourself well, princess, if U don't, noone will treat U as a Queen.
     
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