Black Poetry : I do not want to go there

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  1. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To the place where I am captured by your touch
    Neck kissed in circumstances that send currents to my toes
    I mean they curl ever so tightly that I hold my breath
    Trying not to make a sound cause his ego might trip
    He got to go all the way where he goes down to my nipples

    Where he sucks them methodically
    Gently biting them when he feels the urge
    And I shout cause it feels oh so good
    That I hope the neighbors have earplugs
    Cause I feeling way too free and am not holding back

    Then he travels in patterns of kisses
    All the way to my navel
    Remembering how much he loves to kiss me
    He finds his way to my lips and makes love to my mouth
    Where my body remembers every touch against my skin

    Now overheated and trying to hold the excitement
    He moves down between my legs
    Shocking me with never before done moves
    Where he kisses my legs apart
    Finding my most sensitive spot

    Massaging it in ways with tongue and lips
    That I am found speaking in tongues
    Cause he took me there
    Making me cum in so many ways
    With velvet licks that cause me to sing operas

    While my body delivers in every direction
    Echoing like ripples in a lake
    Then he climbs me and enters with rigid manhood
    I do not want him to come out of me
    Deeper is the only direction I want him to go

    Now like locomotion
    I feel all his energy within
    Gently easing out as I protest
    Wanting to beg him to come back in
    Cause I am so excited that everything pulses

    I respond by retracing the steps he took
    Realizing how excited it makes him
    Letting him know that I cannot oblige some things
    That doggy style does have its benefits
    Like can we do it next time in a sound proof room
    Cause I had to hold back way too much
    And you bring out in me the need to marathon

    I asked to be excused so we can take a shower
    Where after a luxurious cleansing
    We discover positions never tried
    And he too now is found repeating mantras
    Feeling like my body held him ever so tight

    Making amazing grace an understatement
    We go back to my bed and dry off while freaking
    Repeating positions already tried
    Breaking multiple records of ecstasy
    As we bathe in each others juices


    Wondering why it has taken a lifetime to feel this
    How each move maxed out in benefits
    Though every part of me is sore with pleasure
    Baby. I wonder if you could help me
    Take me in that vicinity one more time

    Patrice C. Queen
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent

    Well, Patrice, you are the Queen of erotica. I'm feelin the mood of this flow. Flow On :spinstar:
     
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    It seems like you were/was/is ...caught up in a Maze Trap, and in no hurry comming out of...
    Awesome and very delightful flow, the rhymes of love is on your side...Here's to ya...^5...rock that world.
     
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    wow this was hot patrice flow on :kiss1:
     
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    The Goddess or poetry showing her skills erotically.
    Keep it up.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmmm!
    i can lay into this deep and get extreme
    but i'll be nice and keep it sweet & clean

    This was red hot and cherry fire of desires
    making me wanna ummmmmm! u know !!!
     
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    You went there and back. This was one exquisitely written erotic piece.
     
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    actually this is my weakest area of expertise in expressing word verbs. yet when I watch you guys do it, I think go ahead and try....

    So I am merely relflecting my surroundings.

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    well lets see

    are you spose to be looking at this

    Oh yeah, you passed that mark into oh oh

    dont read eveything Ibrahim .... ya gots to save yourself

    Peace

    Patrice keep writing scribe speaking out of Africa
     
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    ya know, hmmmm, ya know, wellllllllll, wellllllllllll, I had to ge there for a minute. LOL It was fun

    Peace

    Patrice