Black Poetry : I Do Not Love You

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  1. MsInterpret

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    I Do Not Love You
    By MsInterpret (2013)

    In my heart there is no room
    No vacancy anytime soon
    Never will we touch
    Because I never cared for you much
    I do not love you

    A lifetime we will never spend
    What we had has come to an end
    You are a thing of the past
    A man who could never last
    I do not love you

    When I look into your eyes
    My soul feels as if it wants to die
    If I stay it would only be a lie
    Truth be told
    I do not love you

    There is someone else
    Whom I love more than myself
    He gives me what I need
    Much more than what you've done for me
    I do not love you

    It's time to seperate
    Before this feeling turns to hate
    A decision long overdue
    I do not love you
     
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    this piece speaks to me... was in a situation like this not long ago.
    Good work!
     
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    This is nice..You are full of surprises...:toast:
    Peace!
     
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    :SuN015: :getout:

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    I'm Crushed
     
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    lol Aww
     
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    Yes you do.
     
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