Quiet Poetry Lounge : I do love you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by info-moetry, Jan 4, 2005.

  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    Like levert "pop pop pop" goes my mind
    baby, whenever I think of you
    you look fine as sweet wine
    and I wouldn't mind to take a drink or two
    with you I'm always in "7th heaven"
    so I often spend "nights over Egypt"
    promise I'll take you to "paradise"
    "you are my lady" so I'll make sure you see it
    you ain't gotta "rock me tonight"
    just to get me to say "I love you"
    like Howard hewitt "I'm for real"
    and I know you're "heaven sent" so there's no one above you
    we got a "intimate connection"
    plus we both know that "love is a house'
    so they can huff and puff to try to blow it down
    but we're "closer than friends" and they don't know what love is about
    so happy to be "close to you"
    dennis williams said "don't look any further"
    Patrice Rushen said "you remind me" of a goddess
    but I don't know if you heard her
    glad that we finally got to be
    much "closer than friends"
    cause Lilo thomas said you're a "good girl"
    so I don't have to be "curious" about being with you 'till the end
    I can hear Gerald Levert singing right now
    screamin' "baby u are"
    with Najee blowin' in the backround "betcha don't know"
    but yeah baby you are
    but enough with everyone else's thoughts
    let me tell you about the man you're wit'
    I know love when I see it
    no need to rely on any manuscripts
    I'm with you from Alpha to Omega
    I don't never ever plan to flip
    massage your thoughts daily
    so your mind and body are one
    and keep myself busy by rubbing your feet
    'till your mind and body are done
    I'll forever enbrace you with my brown eyes
    so I can inhale your essence
    exhale a love poem daily
    so when we're apart you'll always feel my presence
    the meditative mind can reach 23 million miles
    so when I come back I'll have even more love for you
    until you're ready to join me on that level
    cause they've been hounding me to bring u, cause they also got love 4u
    you see when the creator breaks the mold
    when he/she makes a one in a trillion
    so to keep the angels in line
    she/he permits the often return of one of his children
    and I'm here to tell you that you are one of his/her special one's
    I was just sent for you
    but as soon as I saw you I wanted to stay
    but I have to obey divine law even though I know I was meant for you
    maybe one day you'll be ready to come wit' me
    he/she will see how good we look together
    and give praise and say "look at what the lord hath made"
    and hopefully want to see this look forever
    and I know you think I'm just talking
    but for real this ain't a act to me
    if it works out and you ever catch me frontin'
    just read this poem back to me!

    By Info-Moetry (c) 2005

    :hearts2:
     
  2. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh seeee... this was the joint :wink:
    I like !!!

    Much...
    Peace & Love
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow this hit on the love buttons
    flow on poet express da thing
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautifully written. The woman you are with is very lucky.
     
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    this one need to be on billboards
    made me revisit the warmth of it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a love of a life time, pure and ever lasting. I agree with prizefighter, your lady is a lucky one indeed.
     
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    Ahhh! I love poems that include song line or title references. It takes me there! Nice write, poet.
     
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    peace,

    I thank u all for your kind responses..................

    peace
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    out of all your poems this is my favorite..but then the one you read in chat that ummm you aint posted i likes too...but today i couldn't resist a flow that comes to me when i read this...so I hope you don't mind.....

    And you don’t even know….

    You got my attention
    Not to mention…I be digging you
    My dreamy chocolate star
    Understanding divine law
    My King…
    I don’t know what is going on
    But the language have changed
    And the song that runs my mind
    "don't look any further"
    The feeling that I feeling is like
    “I touched a dream”
    Reaching from the Alpha to Omega
    Within the orbs….
    I send you love and energy
    See, you don’t even know….
    My creator sent you to be
    Did you know you uplift me
    Let me help you understand
    Envision the power we have together
    Let me take you there….
    See, you already took me there
    And back again….

    Let me tell you about this woman….
    When it comes to mine
    Slow to take and quick to give
    Love despite your faults
    I will walk the walk with you
    I am your back when you are weak
    Through and through
    I be there for you
    Let you wear the pants
    No control…become your equal
    When you need it…
    But you never have to fight alone
    Your power when you have none
    The spirit that moves you when you’re stuck
    Love you gentle as a dove
    Bring you from lust into trust
    See, you don’t even know….
    See, last night, but nights before
    I ask my creator to send
    Me someone just like you…
    But I have to obey divine law
    I know we was meant to be
    For I am ready to come wit' you
    I am here.


    "pop pop pop" goes my mind

    See, you don’t even know….

    :donttell:
     
  10. Auroraflower

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    beautifull......




    and a treu emotion behind it..
    makes a poem even more beautifull...









    LoveAuroraflower:heart:
     
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