Black Poetry : I do love you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 10, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Did u hear me calling?
    Last night moon beams words.
    I whispered your name.
    And the wind carried it to your window.

    Did u choose to slumber and not hear me?
    I speak how I feel, and show it honestly.
    Coming thru your window at night.
    The moon beam splashes off your pillow light.

    Open up because I am perishing while u slumber.
    Do u hear me love coming like thunder.

    Heart beats.

    Love streaks.

    Moving too fast, tell me u want it slow.
    I will do anything for u.

    I’m calling your name moon beam splashes.
    Crashing against your closed heart.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da wake up call is just ahead when dat love awaken her head to hear da words u said !
     
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    We truly cannot ignore love. :luv:
     
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    Sweet, with a splash of bitter, anxiously awaiting someone to hear your call, and not sure if they will ever hear. But if and when they do hear, wow, that...that is awesome. I liked the way you flowed with this, flow on poet.
     
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    Beautiful peice...lyrically stated
    with an intense sense of frustrated longing for...
    Thank you for sharing it with us Hodee

    Much...
    Peace & Love
    Akilah :hearts1:
     
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    felt like i was reading a Prince song...very nice i really enjoyed the vibe off this scribe.....Angel
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice piece Hodee..."moonbeams...
    wonderful sense of "howling" crying for...
    lilting piece..very nice hodee...very nice
     
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    Hodee...

    I am so smitten and enamored by this poem...

    Where do I start...(I think to myself), to speak

    of this poem that is a moonbeam within itself

    ...but rest assured it's not splashing off of any

    pillows...nor is your reader slumbering as the

    call of poetic love is being made...



    This was a Gorgeous and Breathtaking display of Love Poetry...

    Loving your style and grace

    Please continue to bless us with the rain of your flow!​
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i liked this poem hodee...
    i felt like saying at the end of this piece....
    rapunzel....rapunzel...let down your weave...:lol:
    no....but seriously...i could see you at da window cill on this scribe...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    awwwwwww brotha hodeee bearrrr :look: *sigh*

    isnt it the worse when your love calls and calls to no avail *sigh*

    this was an inspired piece my brotha and i felt it thoroughly
     
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