Black Poetry : I Do Love Chocolate

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love chocolate. Is often heard. I love to dance is a common word.

    You never hear the love of each other. Say the word. Tell me you love me.

    I've never heard.

    Do you have what it takes. To love this man. Do you have the back bone it takes.
    I can be strong over powering, seducing and sweet. To you care for the love I make.
    You met me just yesterday. You better not rush. I may not be all that I seem.
    Nice smile, nice build.. you like that huh. Well I'm going put it all on you like dreams.
    From me you won't wake. I keep you on edge. It's a control. I like with my mate.
    I'm sorry if we part, I did leave my mark. Hang on I may return. It's my way.
    Riding off in the sun. Like a cowboy would do. Leave the town burning down in his wake.
    I didn't mean to make. To turn love into hate. I warned you up front. Didn't I say.
    Take it slow, don't rush. Didn't I say. Tell you that. I would mount up and run some day.

    Didn't we have fun. well it's time. My nature. My way. My plan. I turned and said bye. As I left the room. Cause I do have a heart, yours I broke.You mean to tell me you haven't met a man. That left destruction in his wake.

    How many times, will it take for you to learn to love. To love you must learn what it takes.
    That being in love means falling down, and being left. Sometimes with the hate. Being in love takes the back bone of time. I'm off new adventure, and land. The flesh, the touch of a each women is different. It's something I just can't explain. You have to understand it's the soul of a man. That he feel the pull and he knows. That every woman is different no matter the place, just conguer, just pillage just go.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well posed poet !
    u express dis so well
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee... you laid it down, did it well, while on the move!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i neva heard it put like this...props. :)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well written...
     
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    chocolate flava flow
    u put on a coco show
    had to read dis again my friend
     
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