Black Poetry : ...I Dipped You In Me, You Dipped Me In You...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you've dipped me deeply into your love
    your eyes are tainted to make me love
    the ways you secretly arouse me
    in me and around me so sexually
    i'm clearly dipped and mezmerized
    dipped into the depth of your eyes
    takin' my body on a cradled ride
    to cum inside your loves subside
    dip me and don't even stop
    the extreme mentality of your lock
    that traps deep me inside of you
    to receive pentration from me to you
    release and dip me all around
    bury me inside your lovers ground
    dip my body further and forth
    over and over within your warmth
    dip me baby with no release
    but when you do, don't even tease
    dip me undeniably in every way
    so you can consistently see the ways
    that i dip you eroticly inside my love
    thrustin’ you up in the midst of
    my moistened walls of captivity
    leavin’ you clenchin' and pleasin' me
    contracting stimulation in ways to cum
    rainin' down allowin’ you to succumb
    your volatile body doesn't even know
    what to expect when i begin to throw
    my captivation of wet love upon you
    dippin’ and branding your body to
    close into mine forevermore
    and all through time your wantin' more
    of me in you and you in me
    to dip and trick and sexually heal me
    you dipped me into your love's nod
    creating a sexual intensity...Oh my God!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is it hot in here?

    Hey sttranger. Good to see you. And whoa have you'rewords gotten a little more graphic, or is it just me. That was hot!!! Can't wait to read more f the new Lovely.

    Much Love
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments girl...glad to see u back...my writin' has gotten a lil graphic....i used to be a scared to write what i really wanted to, but now i just write whatever comes out...plus a second honey moon with ur husband will make u write like that....;)
     
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    nice to see you again my sister...
    happy holidays...
    and as always love your flow....
    it was str8...
    much love 2 u
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let me dip u
    nice and slow
    dip ya body in whole
    lay in da depth of me
    and rock u to a please
    dip u in and out
    round u all about
    dip ya mental in dis love
    as it cuddle squeeze and hug
    mix the whip cream
    da dip lash of the tongue thing
    rapture capture in captivity
    and extreme measure
    da pleasure dip u slow & right
    as ya eyez light up
    like christmas on a tree
    when i lay inside of thee
    let me dip u babe like dis
    into a magical twist
    kiss da body like dat
    and make u moan
    holla and shout
    sing a tune as i move
    mesmerize as i play
    work it wit no tease
    just a splash dat pleasin
    da dip as u scream
    from the erotic theme
    toes curl
    eyez swril
    nails grip my back
    sweat & wet
    bringing it like dat
    da dip i do
    when it's me & u
    yummy yum
    when i'm done
    leave u sucking ya thumb
    dippin nice & slow
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thanks oka:)
    thanks angel
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :angel1: its a lil hot in here rich.... :blush:
     
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    extreme bring heat
    but i am da fire of desires
    so touch me as i dip
    wit passionate whip
    hot hot hot
    burning up ............lol
     
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    oh my goodness:) nice one sis
    Peace
     
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    Wow Lovely..

    " dip me and don't even stop "

    Melted me like chocolate left on the stove.