Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Sep 1, 2002.
As the rain pours down
in sheets from heavenly skies
I am bathed in tears
...you've written my entire evening in 17 syllables.
(thank you for sharing)
dis one took me home
u felt my emotional
tearful state of mind
What a great Haiku
Great work, Poetess.
Elayne - I hope there havn't been anymore nights like this for you.
Rich- I can't know the depth of the pain that you are going through, even though I have many sons. I can only imagine the deep well of tears in your heart. I hope my humble words do have some small meaning. Thank you for the read, I sure admire your courage and work on the page.
Nia Maishani- Oh MY! Such wonderful words of praise. I liked this one too, but brilliance? MMM, that is something I never even thought to aspire to. But if I only garner this praise this one time, I will always have this moment of writers BLISS! Thank you for your read and very kind words!
Gaylee... I love your style. Your words always bring the textures I love to feel. And the feeling is familiar, yet new. I am a fan.
You, my sista have described the way that I feel towards rain..and you know what's the best part about rain? the rainbow that comes out afterwards...
perhaps because I C U... I felt as if I expressed myself about this peace....already...
but I wanted to share right here, how much this touches me...all over.
thank you so much for opening up the floodgates, missy g...
Bert- Thank you so much for your thoughts and feelings. You are my very first fan.
Mikaya lo'-Thank you for your words, and I can see the rainbow now.
Alyce-Yes you did tell me how you felt about it, thank you my friend. BUT it is always wonderful to read you.
Hello? Such a gorgeous flow, Miss Gaylee. I haven't read you before, but I'll be sure not to miss.
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