Black Poetry : I cry yo Mercy

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I weep of da heart
    forth ur love is in awe
    as my soul circle thoughts
    I weep in yo mercy
    to understand
    and offer me beyond any plan
    my love is in your attire
    doth sho her wit
    it doth so well become her
    for every tear dat embrace
    what we now have
    i so asketh in yo name
    da mercy of love dat have me
    deeper and deeper into u
    i weep for our morrow
    and kiss da blessing i so have
    orth i found u
    standing at da edge of tyme
    outlooking da bristy view
    as i blow da sawdust away
    only to allow da radiant of rays
    connect our bodies
    i need u near
    i lone my dear
    as i leave this tear
    beyond what is fear
    ur my sheer beauty
     
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    This lover's lament rings true, and sings blue.
     
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    yes it does thankz for looking inside this wit a keen eye
     
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    She lones what you do
    She cries, same as you
    tears will wash away
    the uncertainty
    and help to calm the fear
    Hoping that he senses her plea
    How she wishes that he was near
    She wants to entwine with his fabric
    woven within the one she holds dear
     
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    Thank u surely one's knows through da inner feelings
     
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    feelin' ya poet

    see you askin' for the ultimate compassion (mercy) from the queen

    nice piece $$$RICH$$$
     
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    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    listen to your man

    this makes me want to say to SOME women out there that you need to listen to your man. especially if he's the type to listen to you. how can we as a race of people have unity with dysfunctional units. we need to build families with positive/negative flow and strong communication skills. men who show sensitivity and know how to take care of home with the help of an understanding woman is priceless.
    this is some powerful emotion intertwined in ebonical majesty.
    recognize the a'iyn principle
    give it to 'em RICH!

    Sha'iyn Abdul
     
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    word up so'ja when one cry mercy for another then the love standard is high

    Listening to him will bring forth a new meaning as he is of her that will enrichen there
    communication and have a high positive note , i agree when this happen the two bond
    is priceless thank u for the warmth and visit w/luv Sha'iyn
     
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    I had to read it a few times to experience the depth of emotion and expressions here.

    Yet when i did....it was like....:bullseye:
    :hearts2: :cry: :grouphug:
     
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    Thank u it was one wit a twist
     
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