Black Poetry : I cry out

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HELP HELP..........As I cry out into the wind
    Hoping.......Praying, for my real life to begin
    In a crowded world, but really all alone
    Searching hopelessly for a place that resembles home
    Looking for compassion or anyone who understands
    I cry out for help, cause fates deemed me a lonely man
    Frigid conditions has rendered me cold
    Yearning for explenation burns my soul
    I cry out for understanding, cause this life not what it seems
    I cry out for restitution, for lifes uneven balanced beams
    Aspirations of a different life,For whatever that may be
    Inspired by hope, yet defused by reality!
    Misfortune and untimely tragedies make weak out of the strong
    I cry out for redemption, on lifes inevitable wrongs!


    Unfinished
    BY: Lj
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    posed well
    feelin that cry
    flow on.....
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :angel1: THNKS MZBA
     
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    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya :madd:
     
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    that was deep and I felt your pain
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear da weeping cry
    feeling ya emotions & pain here
    poet express let it all out
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes ya just have to release all of that pain, and I'm feeling the release here, flow on with it.
     
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    Most def feelin you on this somethin fierce. Much peace came to me when I learned not to question why me but just do. Still, the loneliness remains sometimes, doesn't it......

    Much love for this.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was piece
    makes a readers
    soul and mind cry out...
    in agreement of the
    sentiment...

    Feeling it...flow on
     
  10. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice

    In a way we're all alone. We've all grown up differently, had different experiences. But after all that's what make us who we are today. Our morals and values, and we shoudn't trade that for anything.
    Loved the power of your rhyme!

    One_Love