Black Poetry : i cry for heaven

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Aug 30, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i cry for heaven to come quickly
    so that i can xcape,
    the screams of
    "I HATE U"
    and flea from hells grip
    on this world

    i cry for heaven to come quickly
    so that people won't have to run
    from deadly shadow thieves that
    carry the title of
    K.I.L.L.E.R.S O.F D.R.E.A.M.S

    i cry for heaven
    because syn rocks
    our babies to sleep at night
    and soil carries the blood of rape victums
    and "aborted" babies lie in the soil of mankind


    i cry for heaven to come quickly
    because heroin has convinced
    our minds that everything is okay
    when deceit leaks from our hearts
    and off our tounges like deadly posions

    heaven come quickly:(
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    This is deep...heaven on earth. I feel you.

    Thanks for sharing.

    :toast: :D
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sure many people can feel this one, although, maybe for different reasons, or the exact same reasons. Good write.
     
  4. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank yall for the comments,
    much love,
    -story
     
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    much love story. this is very beautiful and deep.
     
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    Girl with you bringing it like this...heaven come quickly

    this was deep but real................your flow is always so

    captivating.................this one had enwrapped in each line

    imagery, truth, reality, creativity..........feelin your flow...Poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved this here u did it up and made heaven smile....wow!
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall i try to let my poets FEEL me ya know, so that they can feel whats going on, thanks for reading me, i'm glad u liked it
    much love,
    -story
     
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    i 2 cry for heaven to come quickly

    beautiful piece
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love poet, :heart:
    much love,
    -story
     
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