Black Poetry : i cry .... cry for u

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  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes i cry for u
    silently wish i would die
    so many questions i ponder and wonder why

    in the loneliness of night i baby sit my sighs
    embrace the memories of u that sent me soaring high
    if we were birds we'd fly
    our home would be in the sky and tis love wouldn't pass us bye

    some times i cry for u
    silently wish i would die
    so many questions i ponder and wonder why

    inside i cry
    outside i try
    wishing u wipe my tears dry
    inside i cry ..... even when i see u there ..... inside i cry
    see to save u ....for u are trapped in snares
    of these u are fully aware
    just cast upon me your care
    just say the words if u dare

    sometimes i cry for u
    silently wish i would die
    so many questions i ponder and wonder why
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    herlove surely if u look to da hills of glory
    u will see truth & happiness wit no worries
    no reason why don't have to wonder
    don't ask why.....dis will pass u by keep da faith
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to da hills of glory ......
    God knows my story
    He send my love and to Him i give the glory
    you have been the confirmation RICH ..... I BET MY MONEY ON U RICH !!!!! BET MY MONEY , HONEY
     
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    This is so beautiful herlove...the particular part which went straight to my heart is "inside I cry outside I try", those few words have just managed to encapsulate a lot of what my life has been like for the past few years...its amazing! that in those few words, you just managed to hit the nail on the head..

    thank u for this piece...
     
  5. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I AM LEARNING MKHAYA LO' THAT THE MOST PROFOUND WORD COME FROM AN ACT OF SIMPLICITY ..... WHEN U FIND THE STRENTH TO SIMPLY TELL THE TRUTH ...

    THANK U FOR HEARING ME
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed herlove forth which u seek he so knoweth of .......
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the bitter sweetness of our tears .... hard is the fight u fight for years. i count on the day when sorrow we knoweth not
     
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    yes rich said it well


    very sad ,but beautifull her love

    feld this