Black Poetry : I cry at youre Feet....

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ""it looks like the same situation...
    its happening all over again""



    Trough the trails in this life....


    for what they dont see.....


    Trough the lonely nights...



    and the heavy things and beautifull that lay in front of me...



    i cry at youre feet.....




    Trough the push away,s of brothers and sisters
    loved ones
    the spittings in my face
    the stabbings in my vains....



    for uplifting youre name....



    i cry at youre feet.....




    Trough the struggles...
    the great journey that lays ahead of me...
    the swollowing i must continue to do..
    to overcome and victory...



    i cry at youre feet...




    i sing ....


    i,sing tears for you...


    ill sing...
    i,ll sing for you...

    i,ll bring ..

    bring offers for you.

    sing up in my room ...
    or for nations ..
    for you....



    I,ll cry....


    i cry....



    at youre feet.....
    weep...



    I ,cry at youre feet.....








    cause its you lord jezus...















    who carry,s me....
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice piece poet, warm and touching. thanks for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful , sweet and endearing this was very nicely pose'd sista
     
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    Such a genuine feel to your words poet, isn't wonderful how Jesus carries us? I felt this.
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was absolutely beautiful
    I feel like I'm gonna cry at my
    computer screen.
     
  6. info-moetry

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    a name worthy too be lifted indeed........

    felt every word of this scribe sister!!
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have alot of poems that have meaning
    And some that just touch you in a way
    I think this did both
    Wonderful piece poet
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice poem.
     
  9. Bluewater

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    Hi Auroraflower
    This is a very deep
    and touching flow
    of our Creator
    Much Love Poet

    Peace
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea life is tough

    keep the faith
    you will be alright through all the pain
    when must go through just to live

    peace


    DSS

    give praise
     
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