Black Poetry : I Cry A River

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Sep 13, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cry a river
    That dampens
    The fire
    Of desire
    So lonely
    So empty
    Lost

    My heart
    No longer beats
    It thumps
    Painfully
    So weary
    So drain

    Falling into
    A Isolation
    Of unconsciousness
    Hurt
    Mentality wounded
    Drowning
    From the tears within
    Choking.

    Induce mediation
    Comes over me
    As a inner healing
    In progress
    Releases
    The build stress
    I am awaken

    Gradually
    My hearts beats
    The healing begins
    Slowly
    I inhale...exhale
    Healing slowly
    Reborn

    Peace
     
  2. HODEE

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    Very nice. Flow

    Don't cry any more. Healing does take a long time. Think of the good parts. you may not get to have them again, but you won't be feeling bad either.
     
  3. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

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    I feeling this one very deeply ((Bluewater)) beautiful..is all I can say..
     
  4. the_story

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    this is beautiful blu, i feel u on this one
    much love,
    -story
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    now exhale
    and everything
    be just fine...
    everything
    takes time
    to heal...
    nice flow
    enjoyed the read...
    just an angel's view
     
  6. gempis

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    Bluewater, I have been there too and feel you, sistah. Sounds like you did the right thing to let it run its course. The miracle of life and growth: to be reborn! This was beautifully put together.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the warm feeling of tears lay a river
    da pain will heal and mend a joy
    in tyme this was felt deep
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know exactly what u mean.....beautiful...
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you :thanks:
    HODEE, suddenpassion, the_story mzblkangel, gempis, $$RICH$$ and LovelyGoldenOne for the read and love..i have been gone for a hot minute , so glad to be back chilling with my family here
    much love and Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    happy ya back home to be embraced
     
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