Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Apr 7, 2003.
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indeed cry self ova the myth facts of he
now dry tears of new beginnings
i like dis one .........
I really like this!!!! I cried that river before, but once the tears stopped the sun was so much brighter!
cryin dat river feels ol so good you could stop you would stop you even know you should but when the tears come you can't hide and even i know that but a cryin a river is good sometimes and baby that's a fact
that was a tight poem. it was fun to read cause of the way it flowed...
let the gentle streams of rhythmic flows wash over you...cleanse you...of yesterday's journey along the river's edge. cry, little one...that you might see a brighter tomorrow...and know that life is good.
LOVING THE FLOW OF YOU.
the tears reflect pain
and cleansing simultaneoulsy
tears are a way to know we are
opening the wound, for it to heal.
Oh hunny, ssssssssshh...I know, we know, we felt it too.
nayunnadaone, "crying dat river feels ol so good" Straight up truth.... it was like rebirth!
$$Rich$$, "tears of new beginnings" No doubt!
Dee, "I cried that river before, but once the tears stopped the sun was so much brighter!" Knowing there is light at the end of the tunnel is comforting. Thank you!
MsMercy, I'm glad you enjoyed the read.
More, "tears are a way to know we are
opening the wound, for it to heal." So true... after the tears it was like "instant feel better"
Baller, "finally" Word! exhale...
Dream, "Oh hunny, ssssssssshh...I know, we know, we felt it too." Thank you
Reading each of your responses I without doubt know you felt my vibe.
I wrote this piece in Feburary a day after I had my recovery cry for a relationship that officially sank years ago. Sometimes for whatever reasons some of us prolong the mourning process. It was a very emotional experience I hope to never experience again.
wow, sometimes u do cry a long time after the fact. like after shock, mmmmmm...wow.
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