Black Poetry : I cried me a river

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin'it souldeep!
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    indeed cry self ova the myth facts of he
    now dry tears of new beginnings
    i like dis one .........
     
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    I really like this!!!! I cried that river before, but once the tears stopped the sun was so much brighter!
     
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    cryin dat river feels ol so good you could stop you would stop you even know you should but when the tears come you can't hide and even i know that but a cryin a river is good sometimes and baby that's a fact :)
     
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    that was a tight poem. it was fun to read cause of the way it flowed...

    much luv,
    mercy:D
     
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    finally...

    RELEASE.

    let the gentle streams of rhythmic flows wash over you...cleanse you...of yesterday's journey along the river's edge. cry, little one...that you might see a brighter tomorrow...and know that life is good.

    LOVING THE FLOW OF YOU.:)
     
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    the tears reflect pain
    and cleansing simultaneoulsy
    tears are a way to know we are
    opening the wound, for it to heal.

    very good.
     
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    Oh hunny, ssssssssshh...I know, we know, we felt it too.
     
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    nayunnadaone, "crying dat river feels ol so good" Straight up truth.... it was like rebirth! :D

    $$Rich$$, "tears of new beginnings" No doubt!

    Dee, "I cried that river before, but once the tears stopped the sun was so much brighter!" Knowing there is light at the end of the tunnel is comforting. Thank you! :)

    MsMercy, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. :)

    More, "tears are a way to know we are
    opening the wound, for it to heal." So true... after the tears it was like "instant feel better"

    Baller, "finally" Word! exhale...

    Dream, "Oh hunny, ssssssssshh...I know, we know, we felt it too." Thank you :)

    Reading each of your responses I without doubt know you felt my vibe.

    I wrote this piece in Feburary a day after I had my recovery cry for a relationship that officially sank years ago. Sometimes for whatever reasons some of us prolong the mourning process. It was a very emotional experience I hope to never experience again.

    Thanks yall :heart:


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    wow, sometimes u do cry a long time after the fact. like after shock, mmmmmm...wow.
     
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