Black Poetry : I Cried For You

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night, I thought about
    You and I...I remember the
    First day that I laid my
    Eyes on you, you took my
    Breath away and it took
    Me by surprise
    I didn't know what had
    Come over me
    I found you to be very
    Intriguing and wanted to
    Know everything about you
    My fascination with you
    Could never be satisfied
    I soaked up all of your
    Thoughts, your hopes, your
    Dreams into my mind so that
    I could keep them close to
    Me at all times
    I remember long talks on
    The phone and anticipating
    On being with you alone
    I remember long walks on
    The lake, hand in hand, and
    Not wanting the night to
    End...that's when I
    Discovered that I was
    Falling in love and I cried
    For you
    I loved you like I never
    Loved anyone else before
    And oh, how I cried....
    You were my light, you
    Painted all of my dark days
    Bright
    I needed you, like I need
    The air that I breathe, and
    Just like the blood that runs
    Through my veins that makes
    My heart beat
    I loved you, I cried for you
    I felt the warmth of your
    Love for me too, as I basked
    In the rays of your sunlight
    I was the center of your
    Life, and you were the
    Center of mine, too
    But, you see, I didn't ask
    To love you....
    I wasn't looking for love,
    But love was looking for
    Me...it tapped me on the
    Shoulder and that's how you
    And I became we
    The more time I spent with
    You the more I slipped into
    Your beautiful embrace of love
    But, what happened to us?
    Look at us now, after all of
    These years we've somehow
    Grown apart
    I feel your pain...I feel you
    Hurting, because I am hurting,
    Too and last night, I cried
    For you, because I still love
    You

    ~forsomeonethatilovedbeyondanymeasure~

    kaslis, copyright 2000...all rights reserved.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well alright now...

    do your thang...!! Lovin' this flow...
    Like a "Dear Lover" letter...??!!

    Nice vibez!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    CRY CRY CRY!!!! NOW I KNOW YA LOVE IS REAL

    FLOW HEAD SIS DO YO THANG!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah

    this piece is so moving. speak it loud.
    -7
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LISTER....

    gyrl!!... you betta stop ryght now & get outta my head!

    you are writing my heart with this piece/peace...

    thank you for sharing.

    AlwaysLove...
    SunShyne~
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurl!!

    You got me over here about to brake down in tears. It was beautiful, fabulous...darling... I'm loving this. I'm crying over this girl...It was simply............... beautiful...touching, heart felt...hmmm you make me sigh.

    I am really digging this.
     
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    Awww dayum! I am feeling this cause you know I been there too. This is truly deep! Keep it coming.
     
  8. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh wow...

    ...I don't even know how to reply. This is, just, pure love; unadulterated, no additives or preservatives. Just incredible, poetess. My :heart: goes out to anyone in love like this, because I envy them...
     
  9. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this hit my heart hard as hell....
    my soul weeps from this beauty

    thank you
     
  10. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    So beautiful

    *tearfilledeyes*
     
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