Black Poetry : ~I Cried For The First Time~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today i cried for the first time...

    I called out your name
    I called
    I called
    I screamed....she walked away
    She didnt look back
    Nor did she slow her pace...
    8 years of...
    Me
    and you
    8 years now a painful waste...
    8 years...

    Today I cried for the first time...

    Her last words still echoes through my hollow heart heart heart...
    Her last words dance away into my memories
    Her last words are startin to consume me
    Destroy me
    But i'm already empty...
    Now the stars have no beauty
    The wind has no soothing...feeling
    The rain...

    Today I cried for the first time...

    My heart lost its depth.....it lost her.....it lost us......lost!
    Music lost its soulchild
    Now when I play "love", i've lost it's meaning
    The song that was once so easy to define
    Now is lost...in my endless mind
    I lost life
    Cupid turned his head when he looked into my eyes
    His arrows fell short in an attempt to revive (my heart)
    Now I sit alone and my heart decays
    My only love just walked out of my life
    She walks away


    Today I cried for the first time...


    -sighz

    another keystyle...
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very very nice......i loved it!
     
  3. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tyte poem, although somewhat sad.........much love :) keep ya head up
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautiful. sometimes it's best to finally cry. peace and blessins keep flowin ;)
     
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    Bravo!!!

    Lovin it!!! The passion in this joynt is just sick... gotta be tru emotion.

    Reas
     
  6. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo thanks for the replies

    uppin one last time
     
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