Black Poetry : I couldn't sleep

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good Morning Baby.... I had to call, you

    I woke up early this morning thinking about the quake.​

    The shaking moans and shuddering that took place.
    Last night.

    All night.

    You didn’t know that a man can do such things.
    I know because I know what it takes
    To make your body intoned.
    Resonate baby.

    Making you humm.
    That orgasmic rhythm.

    That shake.

    Earth moving, soul stirring shutter you do.
    Drives my feverish fire, force.
    Thrusting deeper into you.

    I mean sing and Lick you there.

    The quiver shoots up your center.

    Not knowing when the next will occur

    You rocked me girl.
    I mean you got me as hard as a Christmas candy.

    Sweet flickers with my finger tips
    Across your breast,
    Sends quivers up your back.

    Flick, there is another

    My tongue slides across your t*t.
    Hands on your backside,
    Other on the cl*t.

    I woke up early this morning
    Thinking about the quake.

    Rolling out of bed
    Isn’t easy, but I got’s
    Some ends to make.

    I’ll see you tonight.
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    now i can't sleep

    after reading this

    i'm up NOW

    NO PUN INTENDED

    hahahahahahhahahahaha

    feeling the playa hea

    peace:qqb021:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sure she'll be waiting on you, at the door, wearing a smile and nothing more. Whew, this was aflame.
     
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    HODEE:
    Hmmmmm....
    This is some HOTT PROPERTY!!!!!
    Do yo thang.....


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    got me wide awake and up all night too
     
  6. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read Da Street So'ja
    Here is how it finished last night
    See freaking with this girl carries
    from one day to the next.

    Man she is something.

    I gots my call in
    Just before responding to the post.
    I hope she hits back.. so after the band ( live bands every weekend )
    I assault with a new attack.

    Here is how it will proceed

    Coming at her commando style
    I’m on a mission

    Hope she has a while

    No army fatigues
    No hand grenades

    Just her in the naked and down on her knees

    Mounting the action
    Sweat making me wet

    Flip her over
    Kissing her breast

    The mission is between her neck and her waist

    Take some time before diving in
    To sample a taste

    Sweet

    Rip off my tee

    No time to waste

    The mission

    The one between her neck and her waist.​
     
  7. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar:Watzinaname:spinstar:

    I am looking forward to the smile.

    When I arrived at the door
    I saw it was cracked
    No hesitation
    I was ready for what ever attack
    The only confrontation
    That happened in the place
    Was her jumping on me when I entered
    Legs wrapped around my waist

    Whip cream in hand
    I knew what was next
    Put a line down her stomach
    From her neck to her waist:ref:

    Lunch time!
     
  8. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One kiss, two..

    4EVERLUV
    Thanks for the read

    Hmmmmm....

    It was lunch time when I showed up

    The menu was hot muffins
    Melons and wine.

    I poured the wine down the center of the melons
    I hit the muffins hard

    Opened the fridge to see if there was any sauce
    Found the syrup ( Dark Karo )
    What a sticky pace

    Syrup poured down the melons
    Syrup all over the place

    Licking up all the syrup
    That particular brand
    Takes about three strokes and leaves sticky hands

    Now the clean up
    Some body had to wash this up

    Reality check!
    More finger licking syrup
    I'm Pouring

    An extended lunch:wine::hearts2::em4300::eeek::em3700:

    After hit the shower
    Fresh ready to go

    I am having trouble
    Making it to the front door

    Nothing holding me back but more desire
    Of her sweet solid figure
    And her innocent looking smile

    I am gonna wipe that smile off her face.

    Mission almost complete
    The rest will have to happen tonight
    I am now late for work

    I never know what to expect
    That girl has an imagination that will ignite
    The flames of the Olympics
    The fire in this man.
     
  9. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    :car: Come with me dude
    She has a friend
    That knows some secrets
    And how to please her man

    You know you my road dog.. wolf. wolf.. is the call

    Get in the car man
    I am rolling

    I will have time to introduce you
    Then your on your own

    Just move in close
    I think she knows what she wants

    So it won't be long

    I know you dude
    your smart and your brave

    I hope you had enough sleep
    My girl said she plans
    To have you up
    For the next few days.:flamet:
     
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    too hot to touch..........:dance3:
     
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