Black Poetry : I could...

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could internalize
    every groove of your face,
    every move and your innate grace.
    I could rest in you for
    hours and hours and
    never want to stop.
    I could fly us
    to the highest
    peaks of winter frozen mountaintops;
    or loose us both
    in the infinite blue of the sky and
    cloud caps.
    I could drink in
    your smile daily
    and feel perfectly drunk
    under you.
    I could sing your song
    in the key of life
    set in your touch.
    I could swim in your infinite
    groove and
    feel the smooth of your
    theory and flame.
    A lesson of passion and artistry
    you make me feel insane.
    I could live in your smile,
    I could dive deep into your love,
    and I could see myself trip and
    fall into your eyes
    and stay there my whole life.
    I could float on your breath.
    I could stare and memorize your face,
    your hair, your eyes, your look;
    every part of you.
    I could loose myself and my
    will to be independent,
    I could loose my existence in you.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
     
  2. mochablaze

    mochablaze Active Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful. I really enjoyed reading your piece.
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mercy me...I almost got lost just reading how you can get lost. :look: and who in their right mind want to ever be found ? what a wonderful way to lose yourself...in another. this was very warming to my heart...thanks for sharing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once again awesome drop from da heart
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa! this is a beautiful ode to love. very tight
     
  6. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm I'm basking in the love from all of you beautiful peeps. Thank you and God bless
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww this is so sweet and tender sound like me at a candy shop:lol:
    :wink:One love :tongue:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, now if this isn't a love poem, then I don't know what is. Capturing us with those phrases, this was so tender.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: lovely flow
    enjoyed this one indeed
    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your love ma.