Black Poetry : I Closed My Eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 11, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I closed my eyes
    And was hipnotized
    Not by what I see but by the rhythm
    You put your depth in me
    And we were colliding intimately
    For the pleasure was too great for me
    And I began to precipitate
    Into your rain and your thunder
    And we began to elate
    And we began to long for eachother
    Something so real and special and so great
    And I love you despite
    The hurt the love so blind
    I love you
    Even though you tell me what makes my heart break
    I know it's you under disguise
    We will be married
    And I can't contain this feeling
    soaring over me
    pulling me down under
    To drown in your plunder
    Your treasure
    Yours into me
    oohhwwwee, can't compete
    I want you here with me
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow sis - I remember also feeling like this :)

    1luv
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanx gurl
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah

    great poem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was touching ! loved it .
     
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    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keep flowin it nice now...Jyntl
     
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