Black Poetry : I Close My Eyes

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Close My Eyes
    By ~Mona


    I close my eyes and think of you
    All the dreams that have now come true...
    only because of you
    I close my eyes and pretend we kiss
    You conquered every obstacle and granted every wish
    I close my eyes just to pretend that you are here
    All of my pain you eased.... you took away every fear.... just to have you near
    I close my eyes and smile to myself
    Cause you belong to me and no one else
    I close my eyes and drift off to sleep
    I pray to the lord for your love I can keep
    I close my eyes and all I can see is you....
    truly, unconditionally
    I Love You
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so sweet and beautiful very warm
    keep da love light on in ya heart..............
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with rich...
    this was a nice scribe
     
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    Don't keep your eyes close too long, you might miss him when he really comes :laugh: ...just joking
    I can feel this piece and it was very warm...keep it coming.
     
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    lol @ queent. Yes, this was a very soft and endearing scribe poet.
     
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