Black Poetry : I close my eyes

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I close my eyes
    And move across the heavens….
    Feeling so peaceful
    Flowing with ease
    Letting go….
    As I let my inner
    being take over…
    Closing my eyes….
    Floating
    …………..floating
    touchin the sky
    dancing with the starz
    as the…………….
    wind blow through my hair…
    releasing my cares……
    Drift away to a far away place
    Loving the scene….
    The flowers
    the sky
    reaching over the rainbow…………
    Oh the colors within sight
    Yellow blue green
    Even pink and purple
    Orange and some red
    Holding on tight
    captured in a bliss wont let go
    for the peace laid
    a kiss upon my lips
    and the taste took me in
    over the rainbow and
    through the orbs
    I can see….
    Where I belong….
    For I want to go home….
    Closing
    ……………my eyes.
    Closing
    …………Closing
    my eyes
    ……………..Closing

    blkangel thang....2004
     
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    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    I like the imagery. I can see where you are floating
     
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    inside the deep a closed eyez see the warmth of a journey so divine
    flow on poetess !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support
    peace yall
     
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    yes ... close your eyes Sister ... :wink:

    :heart:

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    mzblkangel,
    Very serene---so peaceful, i realate especially to this because i have done this myself since becoming conscious in childhood and continue up to this day.....the colors the experiences are fantabolous......i see all of this in your writting......

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    The mind can take us to so many places, and this place sounds very calm and soothing. Serene visuals in this piece.
     
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    this was nice. I'm feeling it
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love and support
    fam.....Peace
    Angel
     
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