Black Poetry : I Carry a Small Spiral Notebook w/Large Complex Poetry

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is the means
    in which I choose
    to present my inklings--

    My precious darlings
    --These proses are my children
    and my childrens' children are their proses

    ...there are 299 ++ poems
    and my genes are in them all
    I carry them in a small notebook--
    and they hold complex -- deeper meanings

    There's an urgency to scribe.

    Prizing the delicate ~

    The persuading existence of
    an anterior motive--

    Preserving the decent sense
    of the imposter
    no matter how intricate

    Remnant forgiveness --
    funnelling the acknowledgement
    of a
    singular un-common digression
    that slips beneath
    the tongues
    of empty
    pleasures...
    ...................and leaps
    ...............................above
    ........................... ............the
    .............................................minds of insipient readers ~~




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now N2

    this u scribe i carry deep down in my soul
    gurl ya waking meup wit dis coz my black
    book is filled up.........:)
     
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    N2.....

    Your poetry is so sublime...
    I enjoy reading you...


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: Brotha, Imma have to be honest, (and I know you love me for doing so)... you be messin' me up with some of your responses! :lol: It lets me know you have a whole 'nother take on my poetry, sometimes its a different edge than from what I'm sayin in the piece...??

    I still gotz love for you
    anyway Boo ~

    Thanks for the read!!

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    epiphany

    Sistah the feeling is mutual! I appreciate your work likewise... and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece from out of my notebook!

    Thanks sistah friend.

    N2
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoops....:eek: "insipient" readers, I hope they get the dictionary out. deep and dope.

    blak
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    Hey!! Gosh darn you Verb! :lol: :lol: .... don't start none, won't be none! :D :lol:

    (stay outta that darn Websters.... ain't enough room in there for the both us) :lol: Glad you liked the piece though!!

    N2
     
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