Black Poetry : I cant.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cant get him out of my mind
    As I try to….dayum!!!!
    midnight courtship
    morning rendezvous
    Twistin in mid air
    Spinnin starz
    Blue moon
    Light upon the
    Ocean flowin of love
    How I adore this man
    It aches inside my bones
    Tears rain heavily
    Tryin to define the purpose of us….
    Not really knowing…

    The words
    that pass through his lips
    Silent lovers
    Best friends
    In a hush it seems to fit
    Connected in our souls
    A blessing of all

    I cant get him out of my mind
    how his eyes pierce my being
    seein right through me
    as we mentally engage
    in a romance of once upon time
    My heart seems to die….
    As my breathing comes shallow
    I cant get enough of him
    Face 2 face
    Skin 2 skin
    Two stepping
    in the gates of this love
    interlacing into one
    Like a dream
    that some how came true
    And claims I am
    his Angel
    The love he makes to me
    Blowing my heart away
    flyin high..not tryin to let go
    riding the sea of everlasting
    what a journey
    ……………he takes me on
    I cant seem to get him out my head
    Yearning but fear to be hurt
    As he holds my hand and comforts
    ………………..my heart
    ………………..my soul
    ………………..my love
    he is the center of my everything
    My strength…
    My love as……
    I began to live again
    I can feel his tender kisses
    And the caressing of his sweet touch
    Feeling him in my heart and all around
    two in love but far from it
    I cant seem to get him out my head
    Pretending I aint going crazy
    :help:
    2004
     
  2. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS A VERY NICE DROP SISTA MBA!!!!!!!
    VERY DEEP!!!!!!!
    MUCH LOVE TO YOU AND KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Turtle
    your support is great
    glad ya likes
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    mmm...mm.mmm.mmm..mmm. Now that's love.

    But, don't lose yourself in him. Always be you in connection with him. And if he cares for you, he will remind you to be you.

    Beautifully written....very good job.

    This is another in-the-moment production my MzBlkAngel. :D

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very emotive piece. This was a hypnotic flow.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth scribing sending a message
    know whom u are forth he also knowns
    flow on
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Money....never that i will always be myself
    in-the-moment production my MzBlkAngel..:lol:
    thanks for the love :luvv:

    watzinaname.. :wave: thank you glad ya likes

    $$RICH$$...indeed the message is sent
    thanks for your support and love on this.... :luvv:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Nice MzBlk.
     
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    My Sista-Queen.....
    After reading this, I somehow felt as if I was standing in front of Nefatari as an unworthy (Yet! that is:) subject.

    You speak...I listen...I learn....We love
    One love......
     
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    wow... definite relation to this herre... the fine line between love and obsession has been cleanly walked. well done poet.
    --peacebeme-MsDy
     
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