Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Can't Stand The Pain(the loss)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miomina1, May 27, 2004.

  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cried a million tears one day
    While standing in the rain
    My mother left this world, last year
    And I can't stand the pain

    Reminiscing, all the time
    Of days and years gone bye
    God took away my love in life
    And still I ask him why

    My mother knew my ups and downs
    And loved me just the same
    She bore the weight of my failures
    And sometimes took the blame

    I want to scream, and jump and yell
    Be angry, stomp, and cry
    Though suffering, sick and dying
    Those reasons don't say why

    A thousand tears, I've cried today
    And I'm not out in the rain
    Still my mother left, last year
    And I can't stand the pain
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was expressed well and i feel ya deep inner emotions flowing
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing matches a mothers love, nothing. It will take some time to heal, but know that a part of her will always be with you. This was such a heart felt scribe.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spirits never die...anything that you see of beauty...you are seeing her. this touched my heart to the core...but you're not alone...we're here with you always.
     
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    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone

    Thank you for you kind words of inspiration. :grouphug:
     
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    yes dear one
    i do cry as you cry
    it hurt and yes
    i to can not understand the pain
    of it all
    adjustment perhaps one day
    but as of right now
    i am feeling your flow
    called "I Can't Stand the Pain(Loss)
    much love,many blessing
    keep the flow coming
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWAter:heart:
     
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