Black Poetry : I Can't Remember Dreams

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't make out reality ~
    Losing sleep next to a dream
    Needing a voyeur' peep inside of me

    Ooh wee!

    I can't recall when last I said
    How much "I love you" everyday

    Or how much I need you, Boo

    A dream come true...

    And, oh girl!

    I can't cry out inside a dream
    Feeling you warm there
    Next to me

    Teasing for real...
    As if it were make believe

    I can't for the life of me
    Bear the thought of losing you

    I'll do the best a dreamer can do


    Darryl Abdu Omari :luvu:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2006
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside every dream live reality
    and the love one feel is the beauty
    as a dreamer ........the dream is before u bruh !

    i really love this flow and the way u did it man !!!!
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciiate that Bro. RICH,
     
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    Dreams are a vision that will some times manisfest its's self as dajevou. Keep on dreaming cause in reality you may be acting it out. (thatgirls thoughts)

    Poet I like this. Flo on.
    :smooch:
     
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    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing quite like a dream come true.
    Feelin' your flo, poet.
    One love
     
  6. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo i was feelin the flo, and i can only do the best that a dreamer can do az well....lol very nice writtin my bratha

    blackluv and bp
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Each of you are a dream to remember, thanks.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey poet i felt this one keep them flo's coming .
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dream the dreams
    that you wish I really dreamed
    fantasising about the metaphores
    where you and I
    are like 2 love birds
    sitting on a pier
    watching the sun disapear
    and just at that moment
    when the sun
    intertwines with the ocean
    it remindes me of
    the first time
    we looked into
    each others eyes
    and found the magic
    of our first
    endearing kiss.

    Sorry had to do it, a dream you feel me.....

    But that piece was hot... Big ups....
     
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