Black Poetry : I Cant ..... I Can ( some things )

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 15, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cant erase the past
    I can only assure you that i learn from my mistakes
    I cant change what was done before you
    I can only say i will do whatever it takes
    Just to let you know that now,
    I am different, older, wiser and in love
    With you i grew a conscience, a true heart
    With you i wanted to make a new start
    So why make me suffer
    Give in to me please
    I try over and over to justify things that i never figured would hurt you
    seeing how i didnt know you
    I do all that i can just to show you
    I beg and plead
    show my weakness and need
    all for you
    What more can i say
    What more can i do
    I can give you my word
    I can give you my soul
    I cant make you feel better about your insecurities
    everything i have done before you has made me the person i am today
    the person you say you love
    So whay am i being punished for growing
    There are many things i can do to prove my love
    And some that i cant....but there are some things you should expect from me, and some things you shouldnt demand
    After all, i am who i am
    :nono:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this truly pulls at the heart strings...
    I think we've all asked...and thought these very same questions
    but true love always prevails
    and diligence in love...will break barriers
    you never thought possible
    even walls built around hearts...

    Emotively felt...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when love strikes the heart
    too many people fall victim to the past
    but TRUE love
    responsible LOVE... stick with it and thru it love
    attains all and claims all
    and I wish the blessings of love upon you my brotha
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed u are
    tyte scribe and i felt ya
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write...
    i agree wit everyone else...
    nice flow....:angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this..this speaks purely from the heart.
     
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    this flow you have compose show a side that is so devine of a poet as you explore the many channels of feeling and emotion..yet still strong
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, this is beautiful, cp. so heartfelt. if she can't forgive, then walk away, I say. those who forgive are close to god. peace, brotha
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling you completely, keep doing ya thang!
     
  10. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very beautiful...I've said it before, I'll say it again, nothing is more beautiful than a man expressing his pain and love for the one he loves. Something about this piece just touched me. Much much love to you.
     
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