Black Poetry : I Can't Have You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Sep 28, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Songs on the PA
    Visions of two
    Fan of your rodeo
    I cowboy-up for you

    :horse:

    Cakewalk,
    The bull work
    I lasso you too ~
    Clown on the ground
    The crowd is so moved

    :horse:

    Old ticket punch,
    Been trying for sure
    He's a good horse
    You bow for applause

    :kickball:

    Lost on a road show
    My heart broke in two
    This heartbroken dude
    Left dead in his boots

    :kick:

    Affraid I can't have you
    Whatever I do...
    I mosey along,
    Playing the fool

    :run:

    Songs on the PA
    Visions of two
    Getting along,
    Without you...



    Darryl Abdu Omari :wchair:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i always appreciate your work, because it forces me to think. what i get from this is being a fool in love but not necessarily ashamed of it. nice flow
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, dear.

    To touch an individual is to touch one another.
     
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    Yeah likes this peice aswell, keep flowing
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need you baby!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    too tyte bruh man u really dropping it awesomely
     
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    your work has always left me questioning things....niceply put
     
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    Swt, can't thank you and bro. $$RICH$$ enuff ~
     
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    Ah, so that's the name of the play I've been starring in all my life: "the fool."

    On the real, this is tight. :dance3:
     
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