Quiet Poetry Lounge : I CAN'T FORGET

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by katishia, Jun 10, 2004.

  1. katishia

    katishia Member MEMBER

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    TAKE IT FROM ME IT'S NOT WORTH IT SEE, LET ME TELL YOU WHAT PLEASURE CAUSED ME. HATRED I FEEL AT MYSELF WITH ONLY MYSELF TO BLAME. FROM HIS SEXY BODY, TO HIS SMOOOTH SKIN, THIS MAN IS DRIVING ME INSANE. TONIGHT IS THE NIGHT WE BECOME MORE THAN FRIENDS. I NEVER WANT THIS NIGHT TO END. I CONTIPLATE WANTING MORE OF WHAT EVER THIS MAN HAS IN STORE. I MUST HAVE BEEN SPECIAL SEE THIS MAN USED NO PROTECTION ON ME. THE NEXT CALL FROM HIM WAS UNEXPECTED SEE, THIS MAN CALL TO TELL ME, YOU HAVE (HIV). MY HEART STOPPED AND MISSED A BEAT. ALL I COULD SAY IS GOD THIS CAN'T HAPPEN TO ME. THIS IS WHAT PLEASURE DID TO ME. THE PROTECTION WAS FOR WHAT I COULD NOT SEE. AND NOW FOR THAT I AM LIVING WITH HIV,,,,,,,NOW I CAN'T FORGET WHAT PLEASURE CAUSED ME .....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt this deep emotional scribe from within
    go head express self
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You hit the target with this one, the message is fired home. This seemed like a romantic verse, and then all of a a sudden...wham. Well written.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sadly enough some things don't come with tags...
    TO ALL PLEASE BE AWARE..."death looks good...if death looked like death...who would go near them?"
     
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    very sad indeed
    flow on much love
    you have strenght indeed
    i'm feeling in your flow
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still feeling this deep scribe
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this poetic message needs to be read by every black man, woman and child in america!
    continue to write on my sista, write on...
     
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