Black Poetry : I can't Express

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Aug 12, 2002.

  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The pain
    the rain of tears
    the loss of years
    of love
    of hope
    of family

    inability to cope
    with life
    with love

    the disconnect from
    the man above

    I guess the word is
    despair
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is much

    comfort in the physical act of taking pencil to pad and allowing the thoughts to flow... I cannot express the gradual unwinding of the spirit, the lightening of the emotional load, the freeing of the mind, the easing of the heartaches...

    The process is as much an edifying experience as it is soothing...
    I guess it's time to:

    repair

    thank you :heart:

    alyce
     
  3. smilin_dwarf

    smilin_dwarf Active Member MEMBER

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    Your tears burn,
    your pain aches.
    Feeling the pain,
    the healing begins.
    Heads up,
    the itching is next,
    sigh.
    Don't we all wish we could save our loved ones from that process?
    Thank you for you passion.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queen i have my soul on your flowz for real...

    keep pennin' them.

    nfinite...
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is poetically correct. Woefully expressed. Yet, it is never too late to make a connection...if we still breathe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let the pen say it all .....express ya self
     
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