Black Poetry : ...I Can't Deny...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Sep 13, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    late at night
    i'm surprised
    your not by
    my side baby

    don't know why
    i'm surprised
    when i disguise
    my love baby

    techinally
    we should be
    able to see
    the love baby

    i don't why
    i'm so shy
    when you fly
    my way baby

    can't disguise
    my surprise
    of lovin' your eyes
    no more baby

    cuz you and i
    should be no lie
    your every guy
    i'd want baby

    so if you see
    me out walking
    just glance at me
    and talk baby

    cuz i get shy
    to see your light
    and i can't cry
    another night baby

    late at night
    i shouldn't cry
    cuz your not by
    my side baby

    but as i try
    i can't deny
    that you are my
    first love baby
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww! So sweet. :) Pretty flow.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully done i love this flow
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is cute:)
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice n sweet
    good flow
     
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