Khasm13 : i can't call it...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i never bit
    and i'll never bite
    i'd much sooner hit da pipe
    then steal from someone else
    cause my wordz aint hype
    but i know if i see my wordz
    in another poets type
    it's gonna be a fight....

    brotha man wants to call sista a *****
    cause his personality is suspect
    fake like a modern day witch
    but you expect her to fall for da fake pitch
    when morals are lower den a ditch
    on da side of the road
    and like a creature you stand cold...

    sista throws hate on her bro
    relaxed da fro
    and succumbs to others with dough
    some hate cause they like otha kitty's
    on da lo
    some hate cause da media says so
    media manipulation like da color purple
    feminist first mentality makes me say
    oh no...

    i don't see nothing wrong with a lil bump and grind
    but is sex....all that is on your mind?
    can it sell a car...yes
    can it put you in a bind...yes
    i like sex
    probably more den the next
    i got freak moves
    that leave women vexed
    i make it easy for them
    to forget their ex
    but there is more to me
    then a member that stands errect
    is it so hard
    to cum correct?.....yes/no

    i got a .45 chrome gat
    in my closet
    way in da back
    so that theives can think twice
    before they try to jack
    none of my hard work
    will supply your crack
    and thas a fact
    come in my spot
    and you'll get laid
    flat on da mat...


    sorry fam...could'nt deceide da topic :)
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother, U decided on the topic...

    Serious @ss problems.

    And it's all so true.
    Keep doin' what U do, dog, cuz it's dope.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i likes it topic or not
    like a free style off the top...
    nice drop
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im feelin this...

    ur rhyme scheme is unbelievable. ur truly a raw piece of talent. keep flowin.
     
  5. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    posmind...thanks brah...my mind is drifting today...
    thanks for finding that commonality for me...word

    mzblk...thanks for seeing dat freestyle...

    ps...you are way to kind...especially since you drop fiyah bombs yourself....thanks sis
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothin wrong with just letting those thoughts go, it all ended up as poetry anyway...Liked the rhythm of this.
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just do what you do boo!

    Thumbs up for just being you my brother. So just do what you do boo!
    It's all knowledge!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i heard dat ...
    i feel u on da gat
    so speak and be what u stand on
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    luv the way u just vented the way u felt.
    reel tyte flow
    yr flow was incredible.
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your thoughts are always so submersive...
    but I willingly dive in because the reflection
    is so conscious, wise and full of light
    Brother...just know
    this piece?....one of your many classics
    Peace
     
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