Black Poetry : I can tell you......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Apr 15, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can tell you
    ……………I love you
    And it just wont do its justice
    wrap myself in rose petals
    and lay in your bed
    just….give myself to you
    but…..
    it wont do….
    Like a thief in the night
    You took my heart and
    Hold it like a
    precious jewel
    unconditionally
    your there each step
    of the way
    like a funky beat that
    wont escape out my head
    you be all in the mix….
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    Got me…..yeah
    Dancing on high
    Sailing over the clouds
    Just feeling the essence of you
    As your soul feeds off mine
    Pulling me in ….. :blush:
    I will love you anyway
    right or wrong
    You’re my King
    My Lover….
    My everything…..
    My dream
    ebony kiss lover
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    In a hush we fly
    beginning to tell the story
    tell the untold…..unspoken vows
    mental siege in a ever lasting
    fairy-tale dream….see
    I can fly the skies
    Sit on the moon
    And just be….
    But the world wouldn’t
    look the same
    Without you
    I can tell you
    ……………I love you
    And it just wont do its justice
    Inhale the love in you
    and just flow :heart:
    :love: :spin: :flirt: :help: :luv:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out givin self under da wraps of love
    tyte flow deep sweet release
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im all ears, good drop, mz
     
  4. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow... very sensual piece.... lol makes you remember why love is worth the fight... nice flow!
    --peacebeme MsDy
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very lovely endearing piece.
     
  6. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet & sincere, nice luving flow this one

    thanks mzblkangel

    :heart:
     
  7. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I LIKE THIS PIECE YOUR FLOW IS NICE...KEEP SCRIBING
    PEACE...KEITA
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I smell love in the air...it's at your door...it's knocking. So do you in every way you can...you are a beautiful Angel and much deserving of this love...

    luv to ya...queentswana
     
  9. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this
    Felt the love so sweet and lovely
    Like Golden Honey ooooooh got me ready to spit somethin lol
     
  10. yahsistah

    yahsistah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice

    that was a serious poem u just dropped
    like i said u got skillz
    much love and blessings
    shalom yah
     
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