Black Poetry : I CAN STILL SMELL THE SCENT OF YOU

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  1. FINDLOVEINME

    FINDLOVEINME Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I CAN STILL SMELL THE SCENT OF YOU


    I CAN SMELL THE SCENT OF YOU, IF THOUGH IT WAS YESTERDAY,
    COMING IN MY ROOM AT NIGHT, WAKING ME UP TO PLAY

    LIGHTS OFF, I'M PLAYING SLEEP, BECAUSE I KNOW WHAT YOU CAME TO DO
    BUT NOTHING I EVER SAID OR DID, SEEM TO MATTER TO YOU

    YOU WOULD COME AND LAY BESIDE ME
    THEN WHISPER IN MY EAR
    TONIGHT I, AM, PREDATOR, CAN YOU FEEL THE FEAR


    MOMS SLEEP, AS I WEEP, WHY CAN'T SHE MY CRY
    HER BOYFRIEND TOUCHING ME & PROMISING HE WON'T COME INSIDE

    LIVING OUT HIS SICK FANTASIES MAKING ME DO THINGS, THAT I DON'T WANT TO DO
    PLAYING THIS SADISTIC GAME OF PAIN, I PRAY HE'LL SOON BE THROUGH

    HE MAKES ME FEEL SO DIRTY, BECAUSE HE TELLS ME IT'S ALL MY FAULT
    I WISH MY MOMMA WOULD CATCH HIM, GOD PLEASE LET HIM GET CAUGHT

    THE SCENT OF YOU ON MY SHEETS, RESTING IN-BETWEEN MY LEGS
    YOU SEEM TO HAVE NO MERCY, THOUGH I CONTINUE TO BEG

    IN 15 MIN IT ALL OVER, YOU NEVER EVEN SAID GOODNIGHT
    YOU ENTER MY LITTLE BODY WITH FORCE, AND NOW YOU CREEP OUT OF MY SIGHT

    BACK TO MY MOMMA BED, WHERE SHE PEACEFULLY SLEEP
    WHILE I LAY HERE IN SHAME AND CONTINUE TO WEEP.

    I CAN STILL TASTE THE SALT FROM YOU IN MY MOUTH
    I CAN STILL HEAR MY SCREAMS THOUGH YOU TRIED TO SILENT THEM OUT

    BUT THE SCENT OF YOU STILL LINGERS IN MY HEAD
    LINGERS IN MY BED
    LINGERS IN THE TEARS THAT I SHED


    I CAN STILL SMELL THE SCENT OF YOU IN MY MIND
    I CAN STILL FEEL THE EFFECT OF YOU IN MY BEHIND
    MOM PLEASE STOP BLAMING ME, JUST TELL YOUR MAN HE HAS COMMITTED A CRIME

    I REMEMBERING SAYING YEARS LATER
    IT'S NOT TO LATE TO CALL 911, PLEASE DO WHAT YOU HAVE TO DO
    HE IS NOT YOUR MAN OR A MAN, HE IS A CHILD MOLESTER, WHEN HE'S SLEEPING YOU AND YOUR LITTLE GIRL TOO

    MOM I, AM INNOCENT, DIDN’T YOU EVER HEAR ME CRY
    I TRIED TO TELL YOU A MILLION TIMES, BUT YOU TOLD ME IT WAS ALL A LIE

    YOU SAID I DIDN'T WANT TO SEE YOU HAPPY
    THAT I WAS SELFISH, BECAUSE I JUST WANTED MY DADDY

    NO WHAT I WANTED WAS FOR YOU TO UNDERSTAND
    HE STOLE MY INNOCENCE, YET YOU STILL CONTINUED TO CALL HIM YOUR MAN

    THE SCENT OF HIM LINGERS ON YOU, LINGERS ON ME, LINGERING IN MEMORY THAT YOU ALLOW TO BE
    FOR THE LOVE OF YOUR MAN, YOU SACRIFICED ME


    © Copyright 2004 by FINDLOVEINME
     
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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the lovin peaceful family u found
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    this was awesome tyte flowing look to read more
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    Hello, and welcome to the house of "love, comfort and warmth"
    you rolled in with a ball of fire in that pen...and some of the flames hit me in the face...
    Nothing would please me more, than for you to say this poem was written from your head, and it really had nothing to do with your "bed" ...
    once again...welcome and keep that pen hot...you got class, thanks for sharing this piece.
     
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    Tyte Poem!!!

    Ur poem was sumthin very serious. Welcome to Destee and i hope u post more of ur creative art on hear to let every1 read. Keep doin the [email protected] thang!!! :luvv:
     
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    THANK YOU ALL FOR WELCOMING ME,TO YOUR SITE WITH OPEN ARMS. I WAS REFER TO THIS SITE BY MRBLAK, AND I AM HAPPY TO BE HERE. I HOPE THAT YOU WILL CONTINUE READING MY WORK AND FIND SOMETHING IN MY WORDS THAT WILL ALLOW YOU TO FEEL, THE THINGS , YOU SOMETIMES CAN'T EXPRESS TO OTHERS. MAY YOU FIND IN MY WORDS, PEACE, SERENITY AND TRUTH.

    AGAIN THANK YOU
     
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    Your words just held me in suspense and horror. You so explicitly painted this scene of lost innocence. Certainly caught my attention. Keep those flows coming. Welcome to destee.
     
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    WELCOME TO DESTEE!!!!!!

    That poem was something firece...tyt flow
     
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    What a profound awakening!

    I don't even know him and I
    hate the scent of him!!!!!!

    As I cuddled in her bed
    locked in an shivering
    embrace with this little
    innocent child!

    Together we, with our
    souls turned out, while
    glaring in momma's
    scornful eyes :crying:

    You layed this from the
    soul and it touched me
    through my heart!!!!

    Heartfelt Scribe!!!!!
     
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    this serious issue was displayed masterfully...
    welcome poet and keep bringin it...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    oh my, this was a powerful scribe
    portraying the most horrible of crimes
    ...stealing innocence
    and it's even more disturbing when
    there's no one to protect them
    ...not even their mother...

    This was so gripping and
    emotionally stirring...
     
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