Black Poetry : ...I can still feel his...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can still feel his….

    lips that kissed me
    tongue that licked me
    eyes that taunted me
    hands that pleased me

    I can still feel his…

    arms that held me
    moans that tempted me
    fingers that roamed me
    body that wanted me

    I can still feel…

    the heat of his body
    the length of body
    the sweat off his body
    the call of his body

    I can’t still feel…

    Him upon me
    Him below me
    Him inside me
    Him behind me

    I can still feel his…

    tongue inside me
    love inside me
    come inside me
    sex abide me

    I can still feel his…

    love resting on me
    name I’m calling
    body I’m wanting
    loves anointing

    I can still feel…

    the way I rode
    the way he moaned
    the way I groaned
    back and forth I rode

    and I still wish…

    that he could kiss me
    does he miss me?
    three years he was with me
    now we wont ever be

    what’d I’d do…

    for one more kiss
    just one more kiss

    Kissin…
    every inch of his body

    His…
    body still calls me…
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Also, you captured the act of yearning, longing for that feel of what you once had, and thought you'd have forever. This was an extremely intense piece here.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks:)
    thats what i was trying to do...when you've been with one person for so long and then you wake up and there gone...and hard to forget alot the things...so i just have to take one day at a time...
     
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    ummmmm! i can still feel
    her
    secret moans
    soft lovin tone
    handz roam

    i can feel her
    compassion
    the affection
    inside perfection

    i can feel her
    body touch
    handz clutch
    erotic desires
    da yearning fire

    her
    caresses
    whispers of confesses
    da soul she pose
    da love she rose
    da beat of her heart

    i can still taste
    her rapture
    her body bittersweet
    her honey skin

    i can still feel
    her deep bite
    her nails strike
    her wetness
    her sweetness
    her tongue twist
    her extremeness
    her body bliss
    of eroticness
    inside my arm
    i hold her love
    the dream and
    her fantasy
     
  5. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne, There are some sensations a soul can give
    That remind us each today, why we wake up on this earth to live
    It sounds as though you have been hand handled by a sex god
    Tongue rubbed, swabbed and caressed, received the wad from his god rod

    Great poem you have made
    Now go and seize a great day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this... :angel1:
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody:)

    loved the flow rich....
    i'll look at ur poem...alpha male...
    thanks mzblk...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome flow...
    the after shock
    of passion's touch
    is sometimes hard
    to handle...

    Feeling this...
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...thanks:)....
     
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