Black Poetry : I Can Put Down My Pen, Now

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bert, Mar 13, 2002.

  1. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see how this poetry works now
    you have a moment, a thought
    a feeling that creeps into your waking
    hours or haunts during
    your sleep

    somebody says something
    or you see a beautiful
    work of art through nature
    something outside you
    captures your heart

    or you're lonely
    dejected, and almost through
    when you pick up
    your pen, you know
    exactly what to do

    scribe to release
    write into healing
    jot down disjointed emotions
    flow with the feeling

    I think I understand
    what this poetry thing is about
    I'd been stuck in the past
    I had to write my way out

    peace

    BRB
     
  2. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BERT- exactly! glad anotha set of eyes
    joined mine in seeing hoe it works bruh. glad you're in the present
    on your way to a bright future. welcome back.

    hw
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bert.


    i'ont know whether you know it or not...

    but this piece speaks aloud... the minds of
    all poets at one time or anotha. thank you
    for sharing your soul today, my dear! :)

    very well done!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah Bert...

    You got it bro!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dat's it fo sho!!
     
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