Black Poetry : I can only be held by you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 18, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Held only, by you alone.
    Moments fading I sit on my own.

    My love for freedom cost us our love.
    It's not that I strayed.

    Played the field.

    No underhanded deals.

    No boby can bring you the story.
    Like I can.
    I'm just the man in your hands.
    If you choose to leave me now.

    I will survive.

    Not whole.
    Cause you took away a part of me.

    I submit. Set my sprit free.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this...nice scribe really likes...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free spirit tyte write on point and indeed
    my brutha ya one of a kind
     
  4. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aawww!! this was so beautiful...
    i can relate to this one!!!
    I luv this one to the fullest!!
    GOD BLESS :toast:
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know what this feels like...
    captured perfectly...
    Beautiful!
     
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