Black Poetry : I can feel your rhythm...

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  1. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel your rhythm,
    With every shake of your hips
    And every lick of your lips
    I can feel your rhythm
    With every beat that it delivers
    The tight calf muscles in your legs
    Makes my lips quiver,
    I can feel your rhythm
    When you stride in those three inch heels
    Intoxicating, waves of emotion
    Is what I feel.
    I can feel your rhythm
    When I close my eyes
    And visualize
    Our bodies trapped
    In a slow sensual groove
    My heart beating faster
    Every time we move.
    I can feel your rhythm
    When a gentle breeze
    Gives me a tease
    When it moves the split in your dress
    Ever so slightly.
    And I long to caress
    Every inch of you..
    I can feel your rhythm
    When my thoughts become steamy
    When I dream of sliding my hands
    Across those creamy
    Thighs, and how high
    Will your rhythm take me?
    Deeper and deeper
    You have sowed the seed
    Now make me the reaper
    Of the reward that me and you can share
    Let me feel your rhythm
    Till the music stops playing
    And our bodies ascend in the air…..


    Copyright © 2001 T.L. Stevens
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes.....

    this is it.

    thank you

    a
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tbone,

    I'm feelin' the rhythm in this. Gimme more, please. :)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    i see you been away...thinking 'bout thangs.

    thanks for bringing it back to the family...coz i be feeling the rhythm of the river that you rode in on.

    keep it flowing.
     
  5. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stored up

    Yo baller I've been storing up thoughts that I need to express you know? Stress is a good thing for a poet, gives you more material! Glad you like it!
     
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    And the beat goes on...

    Nothing like the soul rhythm that you get from that sexy sister when she walks that walk! Sho you right!!!!!
     
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    Definitely feeling your flow
     
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