Black Poetry : I can do this, but I could never do that

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Nov 17, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if it were up 2 me you'd be single
    ready & willin 2 mingle
    you'd have nothin holdin u back
    'cept anything thats illegal
    cuz i watch u watchin me
    clockin me
    and honestly
    i cant front, i get visions
    of you on top of me
    kissin me
    lickin me
    wishin we
    could do some things w/o ur man suspiciously
    wonderin who you've been visitin
    cuz id bless ur body and religiously
    give u pleasure mentally and physically
    i feel the sparks when we exchange words
    all i need is a lil assurance
    and im sure ill work up the courage
    to take u to places that are only for the birds
    cuz even tho ur content, i can give u what u deserve
    nothin but fruit n whip cream & massages with oils n herbs
    i can only give u so much, im not made of money
    but imagine me lickin places with sweet drops of honey
    while u giggle n squirm, no im not bein funny
    sooner or later itll hit u, but u can keep runnin
    but we're gettin too old for crushes, it can be a secret
    life is sweeter under the covers n livin in discreteness
    we're only human, attraction can be instinctive
    i noticed ur curiosity as soon as we were greeted
    i could tell ur lookin for something a lil more distinctive
    all u gotta do is call me
    and ill jump to the callin
    show u the deal n release whats been hauntin me
    just follow me
    n tomorrow will be
    a better day for all of "we"
    but then, it just dawned on me
    im not single, i could never give u all of me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    this roll out speaking clear
    tyte scribe
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl, you already know how I feel about this

    :hot: :hot: :hot:

    you need to post more :wink:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emotions rollin..loud and clear...
    flow on :angel1:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: scribe:)
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall

    just another one of my freestyles, nothin special, but thank u for feelin it!
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol oh no u did not gurl LoL...
    thas quite a lot of imagining you did there...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well go on witcha baaaad self!

    ok....I'm am like "TOTALLY IMPRESSED"
    I could deal with a lil' mo of this...

    Poeticlyspeakin....Girl you threw down the gauntlet on this one...
    and ripped this page to shreds...this was hot!
     
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    NastaRyder Member MEMBER

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    OOCHIE......

    Baby that is some exotic gestures.....feeling it ...loving it...meaning it
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go on with ya bad self!

    Tight is right...showin no fright yo words lyrically amusing me are a shear delight!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
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