Black Poetry : I can count

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Sep 22, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1
    ....2
    ..3
    4......5
    ...6.......7
    .......8.......9
    she was a
    10
    carefully constructed by God
    to cure cataracts causing
    natures creatures to freeze
    frame her ambulation
    her vocal penetration
    created my sweats evacuation
    and I stood wet
    waiting for her to feed me
    11...12...13...14...15
    reasons to respond reactively
    to her reach that touched my
    SPOT that rocked my world.....
    I told her "Go on girl"
    she sashayed and swayed
    silently seeking solutions for
    her needs
    and there I stood still
    wet wondering if I could conform
    to her calls of celebratory
    copulation because
    today titled itself "tomorrow"
    and she sought to see it
    beforehand....
    so I indulged her
    she saw tomorrow
    and next month march by
    before the year passed and
    she told me that
    I held bright things iin my future
    full of.....

    (c)2001 blakverb "trippin"

    don't mind me ya'll
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooweeeee! verb

    yeah! i see u
    ya mind in a twist of
    well don't mine me !
    just my thoughts,,,,,,:D
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like it when you trip, I can count backwards some times.




    One
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLaK-NeSs...


    ...don't mind you?? yeah ryght!! (lol)

    this was tyght and you know it!! :)

    i got a little carried away with my response...
    so much so, i had to post it as a seperate
    thread! check it out... see how you inspire me!

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
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