Black Poetry : I Can Count, too (the response to Blakverb)

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1
    ....2
    ..3
    4......5
    ...6.......7
    .......8.......9….
    he was a dyme
    that is to say
    a perfect 10…
    the kind of man
    that could make
    even a saint-ly
    woman sin…
    (& love every **** minute of it)
    she'd then leave his room
    wearing a grin
    that speaks of being
    cumplete-ly satisfied
    something like…
    11…. 12…. 13…. tymes
    (in a single love session)
    …sweet-ly aching
    & gent-ly shaking…
    all the while contemplating
    the 14…. 15…. 16….
    positions/ways he has
    stolen her breath away
    & all that she can say is
    "this Blak brotha is bad!" :lol:


    © SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm smiling

    cause the sun is shyning....bryght! :)

    tight as always, Ms. GA!

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    sunshyne blue skies bright lights beam'min down
    and please don't go away i need u another day
    wow! :cool:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny

    don't give that man a tan gurl.



    Love it


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  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce. glad i could inspire a smile. it's always
    nice to be appreciated!! especially by one as talented
    as yourself... My Sister! :)

    $$RICH$$. i ain't goin' nowhere boy! :) & even
    when it looks like i'm missin'... i'm still around. thanks
    for showin' love on this one... as Always!

    ZorbShun. he's already a perfect shade of Blak!
    (lol) & dat piece of his deserved it anyway! thank you
    for the read & response.
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    Oh Oh! you's a bad gurl sister. How you gone outdo my piece? Whas up wit dat? :) Now you know I have got to repsond to that...write?

    Nice piece, I'll call you "your royal scribeness"

    how's dat?

    verb
     
  7. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woman,

    u r a trip!

    and your writing is unparalleled!

    scribecity

    sean.

    :nuts:
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How did I get lucky enough to have the 2 Seans at the same tyme yet again?? :)


    M.R.B. (in case you're a little slow today, that's
    short for My RoYaL BLak-NeSs... :lol: ) now you know it's
    virtually impossible for you to be out done... poetically!
    thanks for sayin' it tho! :) gone & get your write on!!

    Seany! me?!... a trip?? nahhh... i just do what
    i do! (LOL) thank You for the compliment... it means a
    lot comin' from you. you DO know that... ryght??
     
  9. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooohhh Mzzzz Sunshyne !!!!

    Gurl , does this man have a brother ? a cousin ? a best friend ? Cause I sure can use me one that can make me count that high !!!!


    go on wit yo bad self ! :x:
     
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    GA,

    Now that's what I call learning how to count and count and count.....Nice scrib, countess!

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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