Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Can Be Your Superman Or Your Candyman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Dec 26, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can lift you to heights never seen
    Make your mouth drop-Ice makes you cream/
    Like little kids and soda pop confessions
    Gum drops give a sugar rush make you scream/
    Cook and clean for you a whole meal for you
    Im not a mcdonalds worker im a man of steel for you/
    Get your sweet tooth going and make it real for you
    Shine like 5 karats if thats what appeals to you/

    Sweetie I have a feel for you

    This is something no other can do
    Plenty poets feed words but my words mend to you/
    When you scream my name its real too
    Cause I scream your name and it appeals to you/
    Brighter than my whitewalls armor-all confessions
    Love is what you make it this is my lesson/
    I drip sexyness I mean I brung it back B-4 Justin
    Thats not hating but my reality is his confessions/
    I can usher in more vocabulary to get your membrane swinging
    If your to orthodox I can get your left side thinking/

    Sweetie I'll get you there

    No matter the situation
    I love em puerto or mexican no deportation/
    I love em black and thick size 8 equation
    Mathmatically fit is all I am saying/
    My persuation or per-sway-son is all in my evaluation
    Cause my evolution from crawling to walking was my elevation/
    So while others want to think how to get you there
    I've done that and did that baby you going somewhere/

    I'll treat you when ever I can thats the Candyman in me
    And when you need a strong man slash handyman thats the Superman in me!!

    I Love You,
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sugar sweet and strong as steel this was one hot thrill bro !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being "every man" for that one of a kind woman. Tight write.
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok Tantrum, I see ya spitn' the HOTT FIYAH!!!!

    Long time no read....nice to read your pen again.

    Much Luv.
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Candyman

    Very nice.
     
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