Black Poetry : I can’t believe

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See I can’t believe
    But now I know
    Why you messing up
    Taken my heart
    And really didn’t want it
    So why the games
    See I was with you no matter what
    Now I just don’t know
    Best friend
    Betrayal of the worst kind
    Cause I gave you my heart
    Told me you loved me
    In the morning afternoon
    When times was hard
    When I lost all I had
    You stood there
    And held my hand
    See I can’t believe
    But know I know
    Nothing of nothing
    Was never anything
    Just a pass thing
    To hurt…gain trust for what
    Say you love me for what
    You need me for what
    Wait for what
    To hurt me some more
    It was a thing of what I see

    Do you know what it is like?
    To hold something thas nothing
    Have your insides ever burn
    Twisted wondering why
    And your soul drown
    Because you was to blind to see
    But now I see…
    Why you go mess us up

    My best friend my soul mate
    A future of you and I
    Did you ever see it
    Or was it all a lie

    (C) 2004
    BlackAngel
     
  2. toylin

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    The pain of betrayal... I feel you on this one. Tight drop!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep heart felt scribe
    i felt dis way down inside
    i've been on this road before
    and felt all dat was in stor
    emotions leak dripping fast
    see i know but will it last
    da passing day moving on
    know thy heart stand strong
    sistah coz u are strong
    this one speaks to me and took me into da place where i vision all
    very creative heart singing stanza .....say it loud for thy shall hear.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love on dis toylin....a friends betrayal is a hard thing to pass once it happens.... once a heart is broken the pieces are hard to place back together

    well Rich.... i think we all be there just a creative write..turning the tables i always write about love and passion...so i went another level somewhere
    glad you likes...sorry you been down this road i been down it to...but it made me stronger of who i am and i know what i want much love to you sweet.... :love:




    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dito.........likewise ....................heart mend but in what way
    we become stronger but unto who and what , why do it even happen???
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dont have a clue....but i know the pain all to well
    and the mending is the hardest....thanks for the peep inside
    my scribe.....Angel
     
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    Yes, a heart mends, but while the mending is in process, it seems like the heart is beyond repair. But one day, all the pieces will be whole again. Heartfelt piece.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks........... :coffee:
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had to visit again and read again.. Wondeful scribe. But do we ever really mend from a hurt like this?
     
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    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    it lacked direction and the pain u felt was real but ..the flow was off....no hate i want to help its all...hookup :shades:
     
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