Black Poetry : i came...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Feb 12, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    semi-erotic~a...mild flow at most...
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    in the midnight
    of my dreams
    ...i came
    i did not mumble
    his name...
    for i could not see
    his face...(faceless he was)
    yet, i felt his body...

    as his heavy, warm
    chocolate covered me
    i felt his hot manhood
    bump against my sexual
    button...
    he tapped it...ever so
    lightly...
    he knew this to be the
    source...the door
    which opened to the depth
    of me...

    as i opened my door
    he slid himself in
    slowly and precisely...
    i, his glove and he,
    the hand...
    fitting nice and
    snug within my
    womanhood

    as we moved in sync
    my hips catching him
    as he dipped...
    the melody of our internal
    thundered inaudible, momentarily...
    then vibrated in alto and baritone
    groans...

    lost in a sexual turbine
    we lost all control
    of body movements...
    heart beats...erratic
    breath...exhaled

    it was then i woke
    and realized...
    i came...

    MsDLite (c) 02.01
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazing...

    how those...ahhhh...dreams leave us...hmmmm...in a state of...LET'S DO THIS...in the wee hours of the MOIST times.:)

    Dliteful...no doubt.
     
  3. alyce

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    whew!

    pleeeeeeeeeeeeez hep me someboTTY!


    A
     
  4. Destee

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    Lawd Lawd Lawd MsDLite!!!

    whew!

    now you and Baller both dun Came'd
    with these tight tyte tite peace'z

    flow like yall know!

    :)
     
  5. KRYizar

    KRYizar Banned

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    me too

    yeah i came
    all over myself just now
    i'll be right back
    i need a towel
    i came i tell you no lie
    let me wipe it up before it gets all sticky and dry
     
  6. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsD!!!!!! Girl uhmmmm man!! not too many can make me speechless......
     
  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A wonderful dream!

    What a dream--so vividly told--a dream that came true--this is sly--Amun-Ra
     
  8. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is what I'm talkin bout!
    Sensuously delicious scribin!

    whew!

    SWT
     
  9. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Erotic Flow!!

    Not in the physical sense but in the poetic!!
    Very nice flow!!:)
     
  10. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right on!

    lol... This was very tastfully done!!! I can dig it!

    Reas
     
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