Black Poetry : I CAME WITHOUT U

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  1. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I came without U
    Wishing to fill U up
    My little buttercup
    So, I guess U missed your nut.

    Sweet creamy juice
    Shot in the air without a hoop
    To catch the winning score
    For U to suck forever more.

    I missed your kisses
    Your sweet sighs
    Your moans
    And groans.

    I needed that touch
    Of your breath
    Reaching me through the wires
    Feeling your desire.

    You are my love
    Cause of the feelings
    U share with me
    As I share with U.

    Caressing your chest
    And feeling your breast
    Touching your mound
    Is a joyfull thing I found.

    Sucking your juices
    Like i'm sucking on a milkshake
    Feeling your warmth
    Of desirable measure.

    Let me adore who U are
    My Queen, Goddess of love
    My lustfull desire
    Of pleasurable fire.

    You R truly a gift of dreams
    Cum true to the imagination
    My Da Wet Wet,
    But since you weren't here
    I came without U.

    By Maurice E. Roundtree
    Copyright (c) Metree Enterprises 1999
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooohhh so beautiful....and so hot... i loved it
     
  3. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK U SWEETIE I WILL BE RESPONDING TO WHAT U GOT SOON...HITTING U BACK LIKE DAT.
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooh i like this, i love the flow of it, just seems so natural, much love..
     
  5. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the luv Poeticlyspeakin.
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmmmmmmm :blush:

    this was, shall I say :hot:
     
  7. renee31127

    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with angelicsage. And that last line
    "But since you weren't here
    I came without U."
    SO TIGHT.
     
  8. Metree

    Metree Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Renee31127...I feel da luv in dis here room
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmmmmmm.....ummmmm....interestin
     
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