Quiet Poetry Lounge : I CAME TO SEE YOU

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, May 27, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    I came today
    To see you
    Been wondering
    How you feel
    You must have
    Been thinking about me
    Because the urge just feels to real
    The urge to tell you how I love you
    Which is useless cause that can only cause me pain
    The urge to say I hate you
    Man, this love thang gets so strange

    We fuss then fight
    It’s getting tired and I’m sick of finding words
    To describe the pain you cause me
    But I know hurt feelings are all verbs
    They cause such crazy actions
    Some I won’t even try to explain
    But if it is a sunny day then I’m sure to dance for rain

    Really and truly there has not been
    No sunshine since you been gone
    And that’s unfair.. so very unfair
    Because you’re the one that did me wrong
    How dare you even smile
    When my smile’s lost in the wind
    It’s funny cause when you reach an end
    You still don’t know where to begin

    This beginning was the end of you
    This beginning was the end of me
    This beginning is the end of who I use to be
    This beginning is the end of what was defined as we
    And even tho my heart is broken
    Each piece remains a part
    And the end of you was just the beginning
    Of a sad yet happy start

    And when my king wakes from my dreams
    And treats me just how I deserve
    Your name which once brought tears to cry
    Will merely be a word
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.......break it on down and let one know what's real and the true deal of what u feel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love causes so many emotions within us, sometimes we end up saying things we don't really mean, just all caught up in the emotions. Great expression poetess.
     
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