Black Poetry : I Breathe

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  1. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (A Sugar Pie Inspired Poem)
    I Breathe
    In and Out
    Thinking about
    Where there was pain
    None remains
    Now only liniment scent of Him
    Closing my eyes tight to pretend
    He is still lying beside
    On top
    Underneath
    Lingering
    Our smell of intimate
    I am weakened at the knees
    Remembering the feel of Him
    Deep within me…
    I am well pleased
    I have to remember to…
    Breathe
    I smile
    Thinking about His smile
    Gapped tooth style
    Struck me
    Strikes me
    Knocks me out
    It’s an unfair bout
    I already win…
    He takes me on
    Uncharted routes of
    Mi Amour
    Ti Amor
    He, Me Adore
    I must remember to…
    Breathe
    Because it is His life
    Which has given life
    Inside of me
    I am pregnant
    With newborn ecstasy


    Amazed By what God
    Has blessed for me
    Together
    We are trinity
    Love given by our Father
    Rebirthing in our Sprit
    We are sun shining
    Realigning with a glow
    I know
    I Breathe Him into me
    Each time my thighs open wide
    I can’t deny
    I swear
    My Breath is taken away
    Each day
    I pray a new prayer
    To stare
    One more time into his eyes
    To lay
    One more time by his side
    To be mesmerized
    Applauding with deep sighs
    As I lay on his chest
    Matching my breath with his
    This is our love…
    Past Present and Future
    We lovemaking memories
    Of what love
    Of what life
    Of what a loving life
    Is suppose and can be about
    On Top
    Underneath
    By His Side
    In and Out
    I’ll I have to do
    Is remember to…
    Breathe.​
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Whoodie-Hoo! "Roxanne-Roxanne!" lol Pardon me. I had a UTFO moment! :lol:


    But, this poem is FABULOUS!

    This was my favorite part:
    However, all throughout, the double entendres were just scintillating!
     
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    sweet piece sis....
    good to see u back on fiyah....

    one love
    khasm
     
  4. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx...

    For the time to read and the Love!
     
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    Awesome piece poet, it's a honor to slute this one :bowdown:
     
  6. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx

    Queen! Not use to the Love poem thang. I'm loving the inspiration and the many moments, I'm having to love...and to write about it.
     
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    This was so wonderfully laden with so many layers of love. Beautiful write.
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and the Truth!




    Roxanne,

    Well, I can't tell:)...especially after reading this beautiful piece of work..wb Roxanne, missed you...Peace In my sister friend, here only because she remembered to Breathe:).

     
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    Roxanne:
    Love and Passion at its best.
    Seems like your pen is luving
    the luv poem thang. Beautifully
    written and expressed.


    Much Luv
     
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    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blushing...

    Still breathing in the powerful fragrance of love in my life and blushing from the beautiful comments of love from my Destee family. Thank you
     
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