Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Breathe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sierra, May 30, 2003.

  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I take
    deep breaths
    and soak in
    serene
    morning air.

    I feel
    it penetrating
    and releasing
    my entrapped
    soul.

    I walk
    under the sun
    and allow it's
    warm rays to
    soothe my anxiety.

    I stop
    and taste
    winds of calm,
    hoping to ease
    my agony.

    I stand still
    and take time
    to savor life
    all around me,
    and I breathe.
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    ohhh! Can I take a breath with you as we walk under the sun. Thats beautiful Sierra! Sometimes its the simple things in life that are most rewarding. Keep flowing! I feel your spirit.
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi PurpleMoons,

    Anytime, I 'll take that walk and breathe with you. Thanks for your comments and encouragement. It is much appreciated!!
     
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    Very nice read. Thanks for sharing your walk as youbreathe.
    be
     
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    Coincidently, your poetry is a breath a fresh air ~
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Bruce, :wave:

    It brings me such joy to know you liked my poem! I am only happy to share my work. Peace to you!!

    ~Sierra~ :)
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, :)

    I am humbled by your warm sentiments! I wish you all the best.

    ~Sierra~ :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    continue too dis so sweetly pose
    breathe my sweet ummmm!!
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, $$RICH$$,

    I am glad you liked my poem. Your nice comments bring me much joy!
     
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    inhale... exhale.... you reminded me how important it is to REALLY breathe... beautiful flow

    peace
     
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