Black Poetry : I blew her mind

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I

    blew her mind

    dusted off her

    thoughts an antiquity
    of absence aching
    and her body shined

    when I
    showed her

    M(I)

    ventriloquist linguist acrobatic
    trick when my silence was thrown
    into the air
    and she flipped my moans
    off her tongue

    (TA DAA!)

    her spasms clapped the
    atoms and there were sparks
    that hit our moist(her)
    and died with
    smiles across
    their faces

    and
    I

    buried them deep
    into the orifice of
    darkness that

    surrounded us
    and we had
    a private moon

    we called Her-eyeon's eye.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to not reply to this, would be a sin.

    Spasms, and atoms make for great poetry !!! LOL -

    You get the gold bro' ,
    take it home.


    remindin' me " I need to have more sex ".
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyp. thanx bro, you know your words are valued. keep scribin' "backwords" so we all can move "for words".

    one

    yuor brother in pen, blak
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Yes, Yes, Yes!!
    YOU
    did
    this
    exactly - accurately!
    :)
    You're alwayz
    in RARE FORM...
    keepitcummin'!
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Per Usual....

    VERB...

    keep doin' it to us!! :wink:

    MindBlown...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA - thanx sister...what did ya think of that line..
    "ventriloquist linguist acrobatic trick..."? anyway...
    per usual thank you for the comp. Words from one of the BEST can not be compared. :jumping:

    one love, blak

    N2 - you're krazy! 'nuf said. peace

    one love, blak :rolling:
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    What can I say that ya haven't already heard???

    Ya **** is terrific/exceptional/sensational/etc/etc/etc!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERB YES U DID
    U BLEW IT INTO A MASTERPIECE OF WOW!!!
    BRUTHA YA #1
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blakverb revisited....

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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